6 room poem process

goal: I understand and experiment with sound devices and imagery in poetry.

in this lesson we hat to visualise and we has to  write done different rooms. room 1 we had to pick a image/photograph-think of something that is amazing.room 2 you look at light- look at the same image but right about the colours,how does it look . room 3 hat you can here? voices?silence? 

Here is were you can listen to me read my poem:

I can see the bright light 

I can smell the flowers 

the bright light reminds me of the night

 I can feel a strong power

     To bumpy to touch 

To dull to look at

The work was to much 

 like a wild cat

Narrative writing – The gift

Listen to me read my narrative/story:

 

1963: “Jo” someone called from down the streets. That was all I heard for a few seconds. Bang! “Ahh what was that!” Jo called “Get out off there “someone shouted out. Its an earthquake. “what,” Jo called. shh bang I can feel the ground shaking. “Quick run!” Jo heard. But it was to late. My house was all really smashed to pieces

1967: ” I’ve bean living on the streets for 4 years now, its horrible im lucky to get a tiny bit of food once week.  i just hope it doesn’t happen to anyone else Ever! even though I know it will. I wish I could have one wish I could wish to make the world a better place like being able to give food and water to the people like me living on the streets and how will I get a home. I wish I could have one wish.

If I had one wish, I would wish for a family or a home. It feels like I have amnesia, like I can’t remember who my parents are , and I don’t even know my age, I think I’m  40 or 50  maybe even 60 I don’t know.

1978:  It’s new years eve, all I can think about is getting a house, wait where am I? This looks like a house, I stepped outside, it was sunny not dull like normal. Am I still alive? I start to cry with joy, it feels like I’m in heaven, ” oi”  what are you doing, get back into that bed.” Shouted a man. 

It turns out I was in hospital. I was just to die as the doctor explained to me. I was devastated, I thought my with came true. ”What wish called the doctor.”

” Don’t worry.” I replied in tears, good bye!.  🙁

I hope you enjoyed my story, if you want feel free to give me feedback in the comment section. And also feel free to give me story ideas, thank you. 🙂

100wc If I had $1,000,000

If I had $1,000,000 I would bye a Home to live in, a Car to drive in (maybe), Food and things to keep me alive like lots of Water and Heath care,education, after IF I had any money left I would give it to charity.

Some PEOPLE think you just need shelter food, health care I think the same thing but I like to have a house is well and I would like to have a car to get to places far away,I know you don’t need education but I’d like to so I can get a job and get money so I can pay my bill and for closes.

 

If I had $1,000,000 I would bye a Home to live in, a Car to drive in (maybe), Food and things to keep me alive like lots of Water and Heath care, education, after IF I had any money left I would give it to charity.

Some PEOPLE think you just need shelter food, health care I think the same thing but I like to have a house is well and I would like to have a car to get to places far away,I know you don’t need education but I’d like to so I can get a job and get money so I can pay my bill and for closes.

 

BTN

In Greece there have been lots of money problems. One of the main problems in Greece in called Austerity. Austerity can lead to lots of taxes. I understand it can be hard to live in Greece when theirs lots of problems. I don’t think any one would want the problem to happen any time. I wonder if its ever happened in any other countries?

100wc climbing Mount Everest

Caution,never do this its to big of a risk!!!!!!!!

I was about to take the biggest risk in the world, to climb Mount Everest,the hight mountain in the world, and nearly 9 kilometres in the sky. Only about 4,000 people have climbed it. So not many people have achieved it. But its about to be down by me.So then it will be 4,001.

250 people have died on mount Everest that proves I’m good at taking a risks. To take the risk I am going to need lots of equipment,practice and help.But wait were am I going to get the stuff and how am I going to get there?